Why We Have Serial Killers

1 Aug

I’m trying to decide what I think of this poem, but I’m pretty sure I like it. The language seems interesting, but there’s a part of me that feels it’s maybe overwrought, but in a good way? I’m unsure, but I’m pretty sure I like it. I like it enough to say I like it. I like it enough to say you should give it a chance; let me know if you like it. I care what people think. Maybe I care too much.

into the heads of the
pummeled hearts at
our feet reminding
us that we are not
safe from ourselves.
Otherwise they say
why would our
children
eat themselves

Read the rest at Punchnel’s.

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One Response to “Why We Have Serial Killers”

  1. Amber Sparks August 10, 2012 at 12:02 pm #

    I like this, too. Thanks for sharing!

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