OH, That’s Where?!

25 Feb

Some things that popped in my mind when I read “Where Married People Go” by Trey Harris at Abjective: WOAH, Pronoun Power, Tight Couplets.

Okay. Here is the ending (sorry; it’s too rad not to post):

                           We have used

our mouths so much they are
beginning to take over our heads.

Our heads are beginning
to resemble pear blossoms

while we sit in our armchairs
in the living room in the dark.

Yeah. This thing rules.

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2 Responses to “OH, That’s Where?!”

  1. Trey March 1, 2011 at 6:34 am #

    this made me feel really good today. thanks a lot! I’m glad you liked it

  2. Tyler March 2, 2011 at 12:00 am #

    No problem man. It was a killer poem. That ending is Gah-good.

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